My Individual Editing of Heartbreak

16th January 2012

Today i spent an hour n half putting my own edit of Heartbreak together i got up to half way with some edits. I cut some shots that i thought didn't fit into the sequence and left some out.

I found final cut quite easy to use as i have had a lot of experience on it before, so this has befitted me in this process. a lot

23rd January 2012

Today i spent around an hour finishing of my editing for Heartbreak. 

I again cut shots and took some out so that it fitted what i wanted it to look like. I also moved some shots around as i had a little difficulty putting the story together to make sense. However when i moved some shots around i felt it worked in the end. 

There is a point in the sequence '1:01 till 1:1 30' i feel the foley will fit in very well. 

After Feedback from sir


After sir watched my editing throw he gave me some advice to change some pits and cut a bit more, so the opening is shorter and doesn't drag along

i really cut up my work so the story is told quicker and its snappy,so that the audience would want to know more and watch the rest of the film.  When i done this and watched it back i felt it was much better faster and more attractive to wanting to watch more.


Final Edit